Double page spread second draft and feedback

Second draft Double page spread

This is my second draft which I started my first design on Photoshop of my double page spread.

Feedback:

v The main image needs to be a lot bigger to ensure that this is the main element within the double page spread.

v Ensure the strapline placed underneath the headline can clearly be seen. This is to ensure this stands out and emphasises that this is Lydia’s story.

v Ensure that the double page spread is exciting and stands out, for example may be add some more colour.

v Add some more quotes from Lydia to make sure that readers know that this is an exclusive interview with Lydia.