Second draft contents page
This is my second draft which I
started my first design on Photoshop of my contents page.
Feedback:
v The main image to
the left of the page suites the contents page extremely well and the size is
appropriate for the page. However, this may be better if another picture was
added to make the page more exciting. Also this may improve the blank space at
the bottom of the page.
v The plain black
box is not necessary for the page and there seems to be no actual purpose for
it.
v It is good that
there isn’t a lot of text but there is clearly enough to show all the pages
within the story. Also having the pages number in red ensures that the reader
will know where to go to read that particular information.
v The headline may
need to be slightly bigger to ensure that this page stands out.
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